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The Source Of My Pain (1st part)
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The Source Of My Pain (1st part) |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
This poem is about a girl that I fell in love with , and she doesn't give a sh** about me, so I made this < !signature-->So she could know how I really felt... The Source Of My Pain Some things are better left unsaid But sometimes Silence can seem so loud So I'd rather write all feel in this poem I'm trying to forget you As a matter of fact , I did I got you out of my head But in my heart... Oh! This pain just tears me apart... I wish you could like me the way I do And just for one moment See me as I see you See how your eyes take me away To a place where all my dreams come true In one day... But this is only a wish Only the last spark of hope left in my heart Among with the pain that tears me apart Sincerely I don't know what to do I don't know which way to turn Because every breath I take I see that your love is only a fake When is this doubt Going to stop running 'round my brain? When will you love me and finally end this reign? Or forever will you be the source of my pain? When I think I forgot you You come again and stab me on my back And I fall again... For you... It feels like you're toying with my mind It seems like you're playing a game Perhaps I am the source of my pain But for now I only have you left to blame... "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society [This message has been edited by Lone Ranger (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
When will you love me and finally end this reign? Or forever will you be the source of my pain? When I think I forgot you You come again and stab me on my back And I fall again... For you... It feels like you're toying with my mind It seems like you're playing a game Perhaps I am the source of my pain But for now I only have you left to blame... -------------------------------------------- What a powerful poem... You don't want to let go, yet they seem to cling in your heart. And they do stuff every once in awhile that puts you back in the lovespin when you are just getting your feet back on the ground??/ Loved it ~Cuddlez~ Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Very emotion filled piece, I know how this feels, I relate to your pain, Great poem!  |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
 ditto i know this pain, somewhat...except for the love part. i have been hurt that bad, though, and it is hell. i feel for you. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
sorry about those stupid happy faces! i didn't know that if you put two of these ( , that a happy face would appear! sorry! |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
dammit! sorry again! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I loved reading this and the writing style...I also have fallen in love with someone (many) and wondered why they didn't fall in love with me...and I hurt because they didn't fall in love with me.. It is not their fault...the love comes from inside us...if it is not there we can't expect the other person to love us. We need to accept them as they are just as we would want them to respect us even if we didn't fall in love with them. These are hard lessons to learn..and much sadness will come our way until we accept that we cannot force love to happen we can only stand back and watch it happen...and it will not happen based on our needs and desires. James |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Thanks everyone to reading this poem and replying it , this is really very important to me , and about this girl I REALLY DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO!! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Very emotional. Those mind games... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes we have no choice but to let go Best of luck with this |
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