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To Golf With Thee"- (For My Friend Balladeer)
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To Golf With Thee"- (For My Friend Balladeer) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Let us golf, my dear, Under the trees, in the sun, Together we could make a hole in one, We could wish upon a star, Make it to the green, Maybe even par, To watch you tee off, Together as we play golf, In your stroke I am lost, What I enjoy most is your company, As poetic words you say are so funny, You make me laugh, We enjoy the day, As we play, And what an honor it would be, To play golf with thee!!! (hehe! I thought you would like this, as I know you like to play golf, and shakespeares poetry, great combination for a new play???) |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
The title begged me not to read, but I am defying myself. It is good, but I have trouble with the subject. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
To golf with thee would be a worthy task Such pleasure would be more than I could ask Due to thy beauty, I'd play straight and true The envy of all would I be with you. Thy gracious swing in all its splendid motion Would be enough to choke me with emotion How dare thy ball refuse to find the hole When you've already won my heart and soul? A birdie would be there...and maybe more As you showed me such easy ways to score. Dare I hope for an eagle to appear? Yes, even that could be when you are near. My love would never seek a different source And I would die contented on your course. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Take your time to swing, Concentrate on the ball, Let it be smooth and slow, Take your time, Don't loose control, As you play upon this course, There will be no regrets, No remorse, For the grass is green, Smooth and soft, Your favorite place, Where you come to play golf, |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Brandon...this subject is about golf because Balladeer loves golf and he likes the Shakespearean form of poetry..So I Wrote it on a lighter note, not to be took as perfect poetry or anything...just having fun!!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You've made my day With this FORE-play And I am really hopin' That, by and by, I'll qualify To play in the Romantic Heart Open! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh, I love your sense of humor, Your my kind of guy, I loved your funny words, The laughter I felt within your replies!! Especially the Romantic Heart Open!!!! hehe!!! (better watch we will be escourted to Adult forum) haha!!! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-25-2000).] |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Oh goodness....Romantic Heart and Balladeer...What an awesome match-up. And there was I just driving by in my little white cart, powered by a baked-bean ... Almost though of pulling out the hose but saw that Balladeer had one of those and with that thing, he took a swing and lost his balls in the rough hmmm..better not go there either.... Alicat, calling it a night.... |
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