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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 2000-04-23 09:02 PM


This house will always be my home
No matter how far away I roam
I am welcome here
Any time any year

To me it's a special place
Of you there is no trace
This is where I relax
When things begin to tax

A sort of mental retreat
To get away from the heat
Of my messed up life
Which has much strife

It is like the calm bay
Where ships stay
Until the storm is over
And they come out from cover

Now I feel much better
My eyes a little redder
From the many tears
That comforted my fears

Dad is the one I can count on
When all is said and done
To be there for me
Through calm and stormy seas




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-04-23 09:54 PM


Lovely, Lone Wolf -- my retreat was
grandma's - but time slips by and
soon your own home is someone else's
retreat --)
This was really sweet.

netswan

Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2000-04-23 10:27 PM


netswan....thank you.  Dad's house has always been mine.  Although I know it will not be some day, but until that day...I will continue to journey there.  Grandma isn't a bad choice either.



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Lady Web
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3 posted 2000-04-23 11:06 PM


Nice, there some truth in it.Cause there no place like home< !signature-->

 

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[This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 04-23-2000).]

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4 posted 2000-04-24 03:16 AM


LoneWolf~
What a loving tribute for your father.
~*Marge*~


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Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-04-24 06:05 PM


Lady Web....yes, there is much truth in it.  And of course, no place like home!!  

Marge....thank you.  He is like my rock.  The only one I know I can always count on in life.  He is very special and I love him more than words can say.  I guess you could say home is where my heart has always been.


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

hsystems
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6 posted 2000-04-25 09:30 PM


Lone Wolf - this is beautiful!  I, too, often  retreat to my parents' home, when my soul is  weary.


Troy

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Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2000-04-25 09:33 PM


Troy - thank you!!!  It is a great retreat for me there.  Kind of rejuvinating I guess.  Glad you liked it!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
8 posted 2000-04-25 09:38 PM


Through all that I've been through in my life I know without a doubt the man I call my "dad" is the one that will always be there for me....I can relate to this soooo much.  It was beautiful and I'm so glad you have a place like this in your life.

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA
9 posted 2000-04-25 09:47 PM


Butterflies.....thank you!!!  I know Dad is the only one who will be there for me no matter what.  Happy that you can relate.  You are lucky to have someone like that in your life.  I feel refreshed after going to visit last weekend.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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