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night fall...... |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Night slides its veil over my body, landscape fades to grey, Colour has no place here, Beauty confined to shadows that move like black flames. Close my eyes, time to think, Conscience takes my hand, together we walk the marble corridors of my mind. Pillars of Strength, rustic oak doors, So many closed, too many have been opened. Old dusty tea chests of memories, Cob-webbed love letters, heavy leather bound books on love lost, Archives of pain. Sit and study, pondering, dreaming Images puncture the darkness, Some make it darker, some explode with colour, I watch, I feel, I drown in my history. Time has no counter here, deeper I sink, no reason, no logic, no boundaries, just time for me to think. -Rich- |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Most sincerely put. I know what you are saying, and I say those words with full intended meaning. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I travel those corridors from time to time, In the recess of my own mind. Archives of pain I do explore, Never quite sure I'll close those doors. Great work, Rich~ Marie~ [This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rich~ Doesn't get much better than this .. 'Old dusty tea chests of memories,' You did a great job with the imagery here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful writing, Rich! Excellently done! Denise |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful...and what amazing imagery!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Rich* Welcome "home" first of all secondly this is magnificent, and yes those trips down memory lane take us many places where time seems to stand still within our hearts. p.s. Shane has been home for almost a week and is going to the hospital for a check up tomorrow....prayers that he comes right back home when I talked to him earlier he made sure to tell me his very handsome friend is packed and thank you again for sending a smile. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Beautiful Slashed Soul --- Amazing what memories can do to us - netswan |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Slashed soul, This is poetry, wonderful poetry to sooth the heart and soul, I did so very much enjoy this poem. Thank you, Cerenity |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this was lovely---detailed trip through your mind....thanks luvie... |
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