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Bunny
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0 posted 2000-05-30 07:39 AM


Last night you hurt me
Last night I cried
I cried for my unwanted ache
But the tears I shed could not wash you away
They only burned scarred memories of you into my mind
These memories haunt me, and close out all my light
A shiver of fear runs down my spine
You are not welcome here
Last night you hurt me,
Last night I cried
I cried the tears of innocence, which are not meant to be shed
You won't even think back on me,
But because of you, now I am dead

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Parker
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1 posted 2000-05-30 11:35 AM


Bunny, this was very heavy, I hope its not a portrayal of your situation. Loved the read.

parker

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2 posted 2000-05-30 04:12 PM


Emotional death is never easy to write about. You've expressed your emotions clearly here. I hope things are better soon.  
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3 posted 2000-05-31 01:05 AM


Bunny~
Saddened thoughts delivered well.
If this is your situation .. *HUGS*
if it's not .. *HUGS* anyway.
Tenderly portrayed, hon.
~*Marge*~


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