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I Seek You, Kamla
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I Seek You, Kamla |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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I've cherished that New Zealander with all my heart and soul. To win her heart has always been to me a worthy goal And now at last through stroke of fate it's easy to pursue her Since Kamla has decided to become an ICQer! I've filled her mailbox with up to twenty notes at once Then settled back impatiently with hopes of some response But, through some small malfunction, I could never get through to her But all those days are over now 'cause she's an ICQer! Now, every time she comes on-line, I see it at a glance And seize the moment to show her I'm ready for romance. Oh, what a great device for me to spot my girl and woo her Since Kamla has been kind enough to be an ICQer! No more waiting for responses from across the sea. We can carry conversations instantaneously! I've got New Zealand on my lap. My hands are getting bolder And she can't even know that I am 35 years older.  My life is now complete. A rainbow spans my sunny sky. Thanks to this great technology, a lucky man am I. So here's to you, Severny one. No words are spoken truer My world is now a better place since you're an ICQer!!!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This will sure get Kamla's attention. Can't wait for her feisty little retort. (Liked the poem) Liz |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey Deer,This is terrific! I'm sure she'll love it. I'm with you Elizabeth, can't wait for her reply. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Wal, pilgrim I tell yuh, uhuh. I don't see how the lil lady can resit that un, uhuh.  ) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Me likes this much, and funny little twist on the title too! The whole thing is sweetly creative sir! You did well!  She'll just pass out, I'm sure! LOL  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehehe yuh i am gonna hafta hit that cutey up too and great poem balladeer i been in the less than crazy writin mood and yuh pumped a bit o blood type O (as in O great) into me yuh yuh |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Too sweet .... I'm sure Kami's gonna love this .... [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 05-28-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very clever writing, Balladeer! Delightful, too, I'm sure she'll love it! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
The Severny One steps idly in...'You called?' she says nonchantly, hair blowing in a swift NZ breeze...'Sorry, I've just been running through some hills...skirts are a bit wet you know....cough cough...might get consumption...but obviously my 'deer has come to rescue me...I'll be fine, what with a nice strong man to look after me...' The Severny One pauses... 'What's that - you're 35 YEARS OLDER THAN ME?! All this time! I swear I never knew...Oh I'm going to faint! I must compose some FREEverse' Ahem... I have travelled far and wide through American lands and Australian and English too yet I have never left my native soil and from them all I found my 'deer a source of wit and insanity beyond compare at last I thought this restless heart has found her man But OH! The horror and the shock! 35 years I whisper broken I shake my head: everything said it all is true My 'deer is but a marauder and a wooer of hapless women and I among them Ah sorrow! (a dramatic phase) My 'deer, my 'deer I must leave you far behind invisible you on ICQ Ah yes I seek YOU Oh man of younger blood! (P.S - just quietly 'deer: Have I convinced 'em? Let's go run off to some hills shall we?) LOLLOL...thankyou 'deer one...you made me smile on an otherwise unsmiley day - so big hugs. You are a treasure...and I shall continue to plague you with the wisdom of the Severny One as soon as my exams are over. Love K[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 05-29-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well Soul-Sis, what a wonderful poetic reply we have here. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
michael, did anybody ever tell you that you're a DOM? severn... your response was a kick! LOL |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
That's my sweet Kamla More charming than ever So poised and positioned To weather whatever A snake charming beauty With a tongue that's too keen For a cobra's sharp fangs That were left on the scene Stay sweet, my love Liz |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Kamla!!! I have younger blood. I just had a transfusion last week! Ah, well. I see that I have let the cat out of the bag. I shall cancel my supply of Geritol and Energy Bars. Any, if we don't meet on ICQ you can always see me in ICU!!  Loved your poem, NooZee!! doreen...Why sure! I've been called a Defender Of Manhood many times!!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ahhh but you have the secret weapon for only the Irish know that it's not the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, it's the fountain of youth!!!!!! Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ This was delightful and VERY creatively clever. You're still da' man ! Kammie~ A very cute reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Why Lizzzzzzy - you're not...you're not calling our 'deer a SNAKE are you? I am sure he has been called that many times have you not oh 'deer? (chortle chortle) Look 'deer, provided you still manage to turn up with that private jet at some point I may just make a concession...hmmm, yes, it would have to be a FAST one - don't want no skanky, creaky, leaky thing. TOP class ok? AND if you provide me with a round the world trip to see the seveRn wonders of the world...that has definite potential for me to relent on the whole 35 year thing...(actually - I think it is more like 30 you know). Whaddya say boyo? K[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 05-29-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh, deer.... there ya go... sweet-talkin' all the girls.... Save some up fer me, OK??? |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
in my best SP voice: "we are not amused" ... ~sulk~ (apologies to HRH or Mrs T .. forget which ..heh heh) gone are those sweet exclusive days in dreamy MSN when love was slow and easy and free from worldly men!! ohhhh Lady K what HAVE you done?? Come back ~sob~ in desolation ..... SP |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Oh, 'Deer - you're a master of half truths! I've got New Zealand on my lap. My hands are getting bolder, And she can't even know that I am 35 years older. To which I must add (for poor lil broken-hearted Kammie's sake) Tis true OLD 'Deer needs a shot, Or two from Youth's sweet fountains. Cuz he's 35 years older Than the Appalacian Mountains! 'Deer - great poem, and that lil Kammie's retort is a real hoot, too! All of the crazies in here definitely keep me feeling great. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
'Deer! Come read this poem I wrote ya, ya no-bell loriette! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Kamla, I'm sorry but I would prefer a girl who wants me for my charm, grace, good looks, intelligence and deep humility instead of my Lear jet, diamond collection, great wealth and fantastic imagination. OK, you old barnacle squeezer, I read your microscopic attempt at wit. For your information, the Appalations and I were born the same year! Now, if you had said Rockies, you might have been closer to the truth....you can insult me all you want. I'm just so happy to see you back I'll take it with a smile. Once this euphoria wears off, however, I'm coming after your skinny little derriere |
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