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I Used To Be A Rainbow (Child Abuse Challenge)
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I Used To Be A Rainbow (Child Abuse Challenge) |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
I don't see in colors anymore, only black and white To me there is no middle, it's either wrong or right I used to be a rainbow but it's scattered in the wind I used to like beginnings, but now I want to end I had red for love, but it was for my hurts and pain too And all of my emotions showed in my shades of blue Yellow was insecure and fears, it doubted I could dance But I had enough green for hope, for another chance I've been looking for my rainbow, I long for its return Because without my rainbow, my fire for life can't burn ~Please look for children in pain and help as you can~ Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I pray that God touch every little heart and ease all their pain. Great post. Jeffrey |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HM3~ Heartbreaking and thoughtfully done. It has to stop ... it just has to. God be with our children. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
HM3, I was very well written. i really liked your comparison to colours. You will find your rainbow....we all do. Thank you very much for contributing to the cause. Marina |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Well written poem showing how abuse changes the childs perspective of the world. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Back up for all! Marina |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I hope you find your rainbow. A touching and well written poem. I love the way you used colors to reflect the emotions. "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very touching, and yes I agree with tess, the way you used the colors wove your poem very nicely....hugs [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 04-19-2000).] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is a beautiful poem on how abuse effects a child~ Marie~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I don't see in colors anymore, only black and white To me there is no middle, it's either wrong or right I used to be a rainbow but it's scattered in the wind I used to like beginnings, but now I want to end ------------ HM3..this is so VERY well written...it is excellent and the metaphors of colors for emotions is perfect...the emotions are expressed very tenderly... take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow, this is a great comparison and a wonderful tribute to the abused child cause. No matter what the pain HM3, hope does shine through. I know if you look out after a fresh rain and sun comes shining through, that in the sky an arc of many colors, bows gracefully down just for you. Hope is a lovely thing. netswan |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
How sad, to become "colorblind" to all that is lovely and beautiful in the world because of the ugliness you've experienced by a loved one's hand. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sad poem! good to mmet the challenge! |
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