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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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I Love You Just words, that's all Three small words But they hold such power Evoke such emotion, such feeling Passions that cannot be denied For these few words, men willingly die Wars have been waged, great feats performed Some dreams shattered, and yet others born But why? Where does it come from? This intense power and passion That binds us so completely It takes hold, body and soul Envelops and consumes us This fire in our soul, Raging out of control Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, this is an amazing poem penned by you Eagleone! I have often wondered the same thing, but could never have put my feelings or thoughts into a poem the way that you have. It's true love is a powerful force, it has reasons that even the heart and reasons itself cannot understand. I loved this one! I wonder why no one else has discovered this poem yet. I look forward to more poetry by you. Take care, Melissa Honeybee  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Melissa....your comments do cause me to blush I think, but i thank you for the kind words. As far as more work, well I have one or two floating around here somewhere....glad you like it Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Eagleone, really loved this!! Excellent. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely done |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A wonderful ponder ... Love this, EagleOne ......... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Dark Angel, Hoot_Owl, Pepper....I'm still supprised that poeple who write such wonderful work themselves actually enjoy my ramblings. I thankyou for you comments, they are indeed appreciated. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ 'Just Words' to take us to a higher plane, enveloped for sure. A very nice piece of thought. I like the shape of it too. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 "Just Words" yes they evoke such amazing things when they are REAL, it's when the lips say them and the heart does't that it hurts. You write with grace and style as always with the powerful message that you evoke so well. Wonderfully written and your format was excellent!! .gif) for you ohhhhhh winged one Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Marge...Thankyou, your comments are indeed valued. Butterfly....What do I say, you continue to make me blush with such undeserved praise. I thank you. As for the pic, well...Thankyou! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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