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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-05-04 11:36 PM


Oh handsome muse,
Do you not see,
Thy heart laid out before thee?

Upon every stroke of thy pen,
Every word reflect to thee,
To thy heart, to thy soul?

Have not I gazed into the loveliest of eyes,
Bright fields of sunshine in blue skies?

Does not Thy heart beat ever so hard for thee,
To be near, As a touch upon thy skin?

My mind is a stir, my vision a blur,
For I cannot see, you are mine eyes,

My heart, my soul,
For I feel with you,
Thy hand is your love,

As fingers to a glove,
So I am to thy muse,
Poetry Inspired,

Feelings, emotions, desires,
My muse, my fire,
Burning deep with thy soul,

Does not thy heart sing to thee,
As a bird in a tree?

Am I not at your request and demand,
When asking to connect to thee by hand?

What fuel, what flame do thee hold?
Is it a flame or a spark?

My muse, my fire, object of desire,
Inpireing my mind with lovely thoughts,

Do thee not know, that every poem,
Every word is written only for you?

This gift that I give to thee,
Gift from the heart,
Forever I am inspired,

My muse, my fire, Object of  my Desire.......





[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 05-04-2000).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2000-05-04 11:39 PM


YES!!!

This is excellent!!  

"My muse, my fire, object of desire,
Inpireing my mind with lovely thoughts,

Do thee not know, that every poem,
Every word is wrttien only for you?

This gift that I give to thee,
Gift from the heart,
Forever I am inspired,"

Your muse is a very lucky person indeed. . . hope that he knows that you feel this way. . .

Just simply excellent!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2000-05-05 12:10 PM


Thanks Sven...I think he has read it  



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 05-05-2000).]

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2000-05-05 12:58 PM


RH,
Excellent writing, my friend!!!  I love this one!!  Your muse is very lucky indeed!!  Keep up the great work!!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2000-05-05 04:22 PM


Lone you snuck in there, where hae you been my friend? Thanks for your compliments and for reading!
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-05-05 09:49 PM


RH...you are welcome.  I have been around...gone a couple of days, but back now!!  Hope to chat soon!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2000-05-06 12:14 PM


Lone I left you an ICQ message....hope tochat soon too!!!love ya!
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