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BlueEyez666
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0 posted 2000-05-03 09:21 PM


~I Wish...~

i want to
break open my heart
and watch all my pain
trinkle flowlessly from my body
i want to
break down
and cry endless tears

i want to
shatter my mask
and watch all my misery
tumble diligently to the ground
i want to
rip my soul into pieces
and throw them away

i want to
break down my barrier
and let you
in my life
i want to
lie in your arms
and shed these emotions

but...
that would be unfair to you

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-05-03 09:26 PM


~I Wish...~
i want to
break open my heart
and watch all my pain
trinkle flowlessly from my body
i want to
break down
and cry endless tears

i want to
shatter my mask
and watch all my misery
tumble diligently to the ground
i want to
rip my soul into pieces
and throw them away

i want to
break down my barrier
and let you
in my life
i want to
lie in your arms
and shed these emotions

but...
that would be unfair to you


Now, if that ain't a tender heart, I don't know what is. Beautifully expressed emotions.

All my love,
Jeffrey







 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
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2 posted 2000-05-03 09:52 PM


Wonderful, beautifully expressesd.  There are no better words than that.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

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