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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2000-05-02 12:24 PM


Ever been in so many places,
seen so many faces
turned around to see one face
that just seemed to stick in your mind
couldn't help it, just stayed there
with such a flare that you had to give in
Ever begin to be something you
shouldn't be then went ahead and did it
such multiplicity then doubled and caused you
to be ah troubled.
Then went ahead and did it anyway.
Such is my multiplicities, of love
and compassions that goes way beyond the realms
of my emotions.
The silence of my journey into my multiplicities
of my dreams and then my reality when I awaken,
Do you ever phantom to be like another but yet you just simply have to be you in the end.
I in my multiplicities of faces survey my mind to all it's places that I must go.
Until the morrow I ponder my traces of my memory
so easily forgotten of the day.




 

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1 posted 2000-05-02 12:39 PM


RoseBud~
Welcome to Passion's.
Nice entrance. Lovely thoughts.
Look forward to more.
~*Marge*~


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devina
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2 posted 2000-05-02 12:43 PM


You've made quite an entrance!!! Welcome to Passion hun...this is one to ponder for sure!!!

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3 posted 2000-05-02 12:54 PM


Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome...I look forward to reading more from you.
Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2000-05-02 10:12 AM


Thank you for replying, nice to meet you also . What this poem is about is personality traits, even though sometimes we try to alter the way we think or act, it just really isn't possible is it? We are who we are. We may change our looks and our whole appearance but can we change the way we feel. I myself don't think so what do you think? It's a complex issue I think.

 

Cerenity
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5 posted 2000-05-03 09:41 PM


Hi Rosebud,

I love this very much, very nice thank you for sharing it and welcome to passions.

Cerenity

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