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Packratmike
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0 posted 2001-12-29 03:36 AM


Hanson's Bridge (part one)

Hanson's Bridge
was just a few more paces
down the road;
i could see its rusty red
and weathered gray wood
standing out starkly
against the white blanket
of this winter's first snow;

it was a cold and windless morning
but I knew you'd be waiting there
just like every winter
after the first snow;
as we greeted each other
your smile
made me forget about the cold
and your rosy red cheeks
warmed me like a cozy fire;
we spoke
and laughed
and shared
old memories,
we embraced
in a place
that for a short while
was timeless
and without regrets;

but Time
did eventually beckon us
and Regret was as gentle
as she could possibly be
as i turned
and walked
back
across Hanson's Bridge;
"Maybe i'll see you tonight!"
i yelled hopefully
against the harsh silence
of this winter's first snow;

down the road i went
now with a joyous bounce in my step
until i spotted something
that made me stop cold...
along the side of the speckled road
lay a blinding yellow daisy
atop a drift
of powdery
white
snow

Hanson's Bridge (part two...the denial)

sometimes i dream in black and white
with dark flickering images
that strain my mind's eye;

sometimes i dream in sepia
like an old Gene Autrey movie
that constantly
pounds my restless sleep
with the sound
of thundering hooves;

sometimes i dream in color
with warm steamy hues
that melt my heart
and make me cry
bloody molten tears
that sting me awake;

but never have i dreamt
of a blinding yellow daisy
atop a powdery snow drift;

i never dreamt that....

Never!




[This message has been edited by Packratmike (12-29-2001 03:56 AM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-12-29 06:41 PM


A beautiful story wonderfully told.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-12-29 10:44 PM


Haunting and sad.  I really liked it!

Betty Lou Hebert

SmittenKitten
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3 posted 2001-12-30 09:51 AM



What a gripping tale...it tugs at the heart and pulls you into the feelings of the characters.  Will there be more?  I hope so!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2001-12-30 10:04 AM


This is so gripping and told as a master story teller would...sad, yet, poignant..

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Packratmike
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5 posted 2001-12-30 12:11 PM


Joyce...thank you, glad you enjoyed this one.

Betty Lou...thank you, I enjoy writing these little pieces that can stir up an emotion or two.  I'm glad you liked it.

Krista..thank you, when I began writing this one I envsioned 4 or 5 parts.  Although, I feel this stands on its own right now, I may add a little to it plus make some minor edits to the above. I'm just not sure yet.  Glad you enjoyed.

ellie...thank you for the wonderful comments. Glad you enjoyed this one.


MIke

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6 posted 2002-01-02 07:01 PM


Mike~
I am blown away with the loveliness of this piece~
It does indeed stand on it's own~
Thank you for sharing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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7 posted 2002-01-02 07:16 PM


Bridges mean something special to me...so I doubly enjoyed.

'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King

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8 posted 2002-01-02 09:02 PM


Excellent writing from a poet I miss very much. Good to see you around, Sir Mike!

Packratmike
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9 posted 2002-01-04 01:16 AM


Marge...thank you so much for the kind remarks. Glad you liked it.

Irish Rose...thank you, glad you enjoyed it.

Temptress...I'm glad I can get back here now and then.  These don't seem to want to come out as easily as they did a few months back but I'm still trying.  Glad you enjoy my little stories. *S*

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10 posted 2002-01-04 08:51 AM


Mike~
I just 'had' to come back and read this again~
And ... this ... this is scrumptious~

'sometimes i dream in color
with warm steamy hues
that melt my heart
and make me cry
bloody molten tears
that sting me awake;

but never have i dreamt
of a blinding yellow daisy
atop a powdery snow drift;

i never dreamt that....

Never!


Thank you again and again~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                   

Packratmike
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11 posted 2002-01-05 07:23 AM


Thank you, Marge!!!  Makes me proud and honored to hear that coming from you.

Mike

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