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Songbird
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0 posted 2001-10-05 08:01 PM



On a cool October evening
Sun descending
White scattered clouds filter
A baby blue sky

I listen to the hush in the air
As birds and insects sounds
Now are spaced in longer intervals
The second hand is in slow motion

Nature's clock is set five minutes to twelve
As ants crawl into their nest
Squirrels gather their last nuts
And birds turn their wings south

Anticipation
Is the only word I can think of
As I sit in a garden swing
Watching a tree stump burn

Wondering what kind of winter will it be?

© Copyright 2001 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-10-05 08:19 PM


Contemplative words.  Hope you have anice winter.  Joyce
Suzanne Arlene
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2 posted 2001-10-05 09:46 PM


Funny when the leaves start fallin and you can see threw the trees you do wonder what winter will bring. I love winter  It is nice to see the white beauty of it.
Great poem and great thoughts.

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3 posted 2001-10-05 10:16 PM


ah I much prefer summer, winter seems harsh to me, but well written

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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4 posted 2001-10-06 04:25 PM


Lovely, my dear friend! I hope it will be a mild one....though I love the spakle and enchantment of ice on the trees!  Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Munda
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5 posted 2001-10-06 04:31 PM


Anticipation - exactly the feeling your poem left me with. Wonderful write.  
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6 posted 2001-10-06 05:21 PM


It is indeed beautiful here in Mississippi right now, isn't it? I can't wait to find out what kind of Winter we will have. I am hoping it will be a very cold one for some reason. This is simply beautiful, Lady.   We must have a visit someday.  

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Marilyn
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7 posted 2001-10-06 11:45 PM


I enjoyed this piece very much. I anticipate the changes in the weather as well. Seems symbolic of the changes of life.

Thanks for the read.

Marilyn.

Songbird
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8 posted 2001-10-06 11:51 PM


Thanks everybody.. I am not much for winter..but Fall always bring anticipation, and especially this year. Temptress that would be great I need to get away occasionally.
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9 posted 2001-10-07 01:55 AM


I guess we are all wondering what winter will bring this year.  I live in Northern Idaho, so snow is always in the picture. We just don't know how much yet!! Hope it's a mild one.

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2001-10-08 09:37 AM


SongBird~
Well ... I always said that the stork knew what he was doing when he dropped me in Florida~

I don't do cold well at all ! !

Actually I hope the entire nation has a very mild winter.
Of course anything below 60° is Brrrrrrr to me~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Songbird
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11 posted 2002-09-29 02:58 AM


Forgive me for bumping  this one up..but here it is almost October again.. and I am now in California..where there is not much anticipation for winter.. only a wishful need for rain.  Miss writing and posting but have little time as I am helping my parents through the winter of their life.
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