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symphony_of_thoughts
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since 2003-08-03
Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2004-12-06 08:23 PM


I cried my emotion like ebola
All over a piece of paper,
Or a string of thoughts
All sloppily as it went in
It came out,
Left with the slim air
I couldn't grow
But rotting trees
In the swamp,
With even less glamor
Than the pessimistic could see,
Less than I could believe



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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
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1 posted 2004-12-07 05:45 PM


Ebola? Ouch! I hope it's not Contagious... I've found myself there a few times, myself, slinging mucus all over myself. Not a pretty sight. Very descriptive writing.  Good job. -Bob
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