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junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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uk

0 posted 2003-06-12 01:00 PM




A million cells of iridescent bubbles
Stroke my skin dissolving my troubles
Cocooned in a liquid blanket of bliss
Immersed in tickling Like a babies kiss

Soothing and smoothing
Thoughts like clouds drift away
In the delicious aroma
Of a delicate bouquet

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-06-12 01:09 PM


Lovely June..makes me want to hop into a warm bubble bath.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

idleeyes86
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since 2003-06-09
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Somewhere over the rainbow
2 posted 2003-06-12 01:16 PM


Really liked this for me there is nothing better than a nice hot bath after a hard day (or just any day really)

Everybody hurts, take comfort in your friends, cos everybody hurts sometimes

(r.e.m)

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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-06-12 01:27 PM


Ooooh, I have a cold, and this sounds so inviting. I might go run myself a nice bubble bath right now! Chris
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4 posted 2003-06-13 11:25 PM


junemac:  This sounds so soothing and I know it is!

Betty Lou Hebert

teledon
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since 2003-03-30
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Florida USA
5 posted 2003-06-14 01:16 AM


ah, women and their bubble baths ..
nicely and crisply written ..
well gotta go .. time to jump into our hot tub .. I've got it set to about 102 degrees
Don

"keep it simple"

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6 posted 2003-06-14 11:28 PM


This makes me purr.  Joyce
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