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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-06-08 10:56 PM


Don’t Die My Flowers

Flowers, flowers, what should I say?
Flowers, flowers, what should I say,
Seeing your
Dying leaves go dry?

I once heard talking to flowers
Heals Many;
The holes in hearts so may be revived.
Yet all I am seeing is the empty stems.

Tell me
It’s true,
Those flowers can heal many,
And nature brings hope alive.

I remember
Just yesterday,
You were in my friend’s arms.
You were so pretty, yet now hues are gone.

Tell me, tell me,
Our friendship doesn’t end
As our flowers entwine with dust,
As our distance grown in miles.

Tell me, tell me,
What has gone wrong?
Tell me, tell me,
I am still your friend.

Flowers, flowers, what should I say?
Flowers, flowers, what should I say?
Yesterday is gone, now I have just to face
The sorrow
            and remorse…

©June 8, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Side Note: This is inspire by a plant that my friend given me. Our friendship is well.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-09 09:32 AM


Eliza - this is lovely. Flowers like friendships will never die as long as we keep the wonderful memories of them in our hearts. hugs, Chris
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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2 posted 2003-06-09 12:30 PM


Dear Eliza,

its so sweet of u to write abt a gift from a gd fren ^_^ i like this v. much, esp the last stanza:

Flowers, flowers, what should I say?
Flowers, flowers, what should I say?
Yesterday is gone, now I have just to face
The sorrow
            and remorse…

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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