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ObeyYourGoldfish
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since 2003-05-18
Posts 12


0 posted 2003-05-18 05:48 PM


You were my hero,
And even now i cant say your not
You taught me so much,
Like how to dodge a punch.
Even when i knew i should leave,
I stayed with you
I loved you so much,
The first time you said you loved me,
Was the night i got my first black eye.
The next time you said hi i was afraid
I didnt understand your sherade.
You said you were sorry,
And like a fool i believed you.
I loved you so much
I thought i desereved every punch
Never did i realize it was to late to leave
Until u saw you so drunk you heaved
You turned on me to rant and rave
One day i tried to be brave,
Told you to shape up, or we were through
That was my mistake,
That night you took, all there was to take.

Then one day luck sided with me
You got caught fighting, your last offense
You always were so dense
Cops finally got you locked away
And there i hope you stay.

You say Freak like it's a bad thing...
~Breah

© Copyright 2003 Breah Burton - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2003-05-18 06:25 PM


Run, run, run to the nearest exit.  I hope he stays in jail a long time.  You don't deserve this.  Love, Joyce
garysgirl
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Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-05-18 07:56 PM


No, you certainly don't deserve this type treatment. I also hope that he stays in jail and that he gets help for his behavior.
Heart hugs to you,  
Ethel

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2003-05-18 09:29 PM


No one deserves this kind of abuse. I've seen it in my friends and understand that it takes a lot of guts to walk away.


And I wanted to tell you that I love your member name!! It's very original!

ObeyYourGoldfish
Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 12

4 posted 2003-05-18 10:10 PM


Hey everyone thanks for telling me what you think. I like feedback, keep it coming please!

You say Freak like it's a bad thing...
~Breah

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-05-25 01:21 AM


very sad...I have been there
midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
6 posted 2003-05-25 11:35 AM


Dear Breah i share their sentiments! u're better off and will find a muchmuch better one hehehe

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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