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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-04-14 09:52 PM


Waiting for a Ride

I'm on an undecided path,
Looking signs for right direction.
I'm on an endless path,
At least I'm feeling like it is.
I'm in the middle of no where,
Waiting someone to pick me up.
I'm waiting for a ride,
Waiting someone to pick me up.

(c)April 14, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2003-04-15 11:48 AM


Hope you get that ride soon.  Love, Joyce
SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
2 posted 2003-04-16 09:14 AM


Hope that you get to where you want to be.
jaysh
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 133
IL, USA
3 posted 2003-04-17 10:12 PM


nice poem, I cant relate to that easily, keep up the great work
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