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Wedding Waltz (Correct Version) |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Wedding Waltz Step one, move your leg to the right, Holding my hands forever. Step two, sea waves wash over our heads, As our testing water. Step three, thousand mile of journey, Now begin with you and me. Step four, learning we can't change each other, We learn the art of compromise. Step five, walking on the beach, Spending eternity with you. Step six, you hold my hand And repeat my words endlessly No matter how many steps, Dance under sun or rain, Our heart reflect each other, Shining brighter than our rings, For rings are just a symbol. Dance with me, darling, please, I shall make our work remarkable. Dance with me, forever on stage, I would like all the world witness our love. Every day shall be our special day, And morning smiles are best gifts of All others earthly things. One smile from you Will melt me away, Like the taste of creamy white Stirring in our coffee. Step one, move your leg to the right, Holding my hands forever. Step two, sea waves wash over our heads, As our testing water. Step three, thousand mile of journey, Now begin with you and me. Step four, learning we can't change each other, We learn the art of compromise. Step five, walking on the beach, Spending eternity with you. Step six, you hold my hand And repeat my words endlessly (c) April 1, 2003 Eliza Simmons Side Note: I only did five step in original draft, obviously I don't know a think about waltz...cuz it was supposingly 3/3 LOL Eliza Simmons |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhEliza~ Going through these lovely movements, I realized that perhaps the most important step is Step #4 ! Well done, poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: I have to agree with Marge. Step #4 is definitely of major importance. The other steps are lovely and thoughtful too. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
May you always waltz through life. Love, Joyce |
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CHILI Member
since 2002-09-08
Posts 244 |
Eliza, this was great. Step 4 is the one. Thanks for sharing.  |
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