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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-04-07 08:36 PM


I didn't believe before,
But time is a true healer
Of sores of the hearts.

It is a magic wand
That not only closes the wounds,
But also closes the hearts.

Long ago we so called love summer storm,
Now all there is left,
Is vague memories and some laughs.

Laugh at children's love,
And yonder dreams,
That yesterday was but brief.

When summer gets too hot,
A summer storm and some rain
Will cool down the hearts.

The same summer storm
Contains the tears of lovers
Leaving behind of a trail.

//my ex-boyfriend is forgetting me and the past...Good for him....My mine should have somebody off too, just not him.


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.


[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (04-09-2003 11:43 PM).]

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Nightshade
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1 posted 2003-04-07 09:46 PM


The same summer storm
Contains the tears of lovers

Eliza - I really like these lines! Nice poem, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2003-04-09 01:47 PM


Time is a healer that
not only closes wounds
but also close hearts.

A profund bit of wisdon here.  Joyce

midnightblues
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3 posted 2003-04-10 12:55 PM


I do agree with Joyce. This whole piece is indeed profound and thought provoking...

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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