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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-03-29 07:54 PM


Landing on Flowers' Mines

Purple butterfly
Lightly walks on air.
Glass-like path of air
Reflect butterfly's dress.
White dot on butterfly's lace
Lift up the feather-like body.
Tip-toe here and there,
Landing on flowers' mines.

(c)Mar 29, 2003
Eliza Simmons


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

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1 posted 2003-03-29 08:40 PM


Love this Eliza!! Butterflies & Flowers.....two of my favourite things. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2003-03-29 09:58 PM


Light, soft, and carefree writing that
reflects the butterfly so very well...

-Bob

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3 posted 2003-03-29 10:20 PM


Your writing is soft and subtle as your subject.  Joyce
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