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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-03-24 12:34 PM


My Roller

A little bit left,
A little bit right,
A little turn here,
A little twist there,
Swinging and swaying,
I dance with my roller,
Accompanying by drum beats
Of horns and foot steps,
The engine roaring.

A little bit left,
A little bit right,
A little turn here,
A little twist there,
Swinging and Swaying,
I dance with my roller.
My roller tip-toe jump
Over the curb, and
Making a full turn in the air.

And I travel with my roller,
To south, west, north and east.

(c)Mar 24, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Side note: try to image it is board skating, whatever you call it....it is an equally fine picture, I think.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-03-24 12:55 PM


You drew a good picture of skate boarding all though I am much too old for this sport.  I was a little confused by the term roller.  Joyce
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-03-24 02:08 PM


Eliza~
Instant connection to the motion~

As a lifelong artistic roller-skater, teacher and owner/manager of a roller skating center ... I STILL love the gentle motion-on-wheels~

You word-painted a vivid imagery~

Koolers, gal !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2003-03-25 04:08 PM


Eliza:  This is refreshing and cute. I never did learn to roller skate, much to my regret!  Sounds wonderful.

Betty Lou Hebert

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