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SPIRIT
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0 posted 2003-02-16 03:20 PM


CRAVINGS

How enticing,
Absolutely delicious.
My being quivers
In divine anticipation.
I lick my lips
To prepare myself
For such a treat
Forthcoming.

Wide-eyed and hungered
I lustily await.
I am quite wanton
With my needs.
In reckless abandon
My desires
Run away
With me.

Oh!
Please,
Please,
Don't go so slow.
Faster!
Faster!
I can't go
Much longer.

Thank Heavens!
We have reached
The glorious pinnacle
Of my cravings.

We have
Finally
Reached
The ice cream parlor.
"I'll take two scoops
Of Butter Pecan, please.
Thank You."


I be me BUT who does me be?

© Copyright 2003 das - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-16 11:12 PM


SPIRIT:  It just happens that butter pecan is my favorite ice cream also.  I have to eat the sugarless kind but it's still yummy!
Cute poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2003-02-17 11:45 AM


SPIRIT~
LOL ..... a double-scoop of *giggle-smiggles* here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*

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3 posted 2003-02-17 02:40 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, yay, we all scream for ice cream, you always make me smile with your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Das, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Denise
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4 posted 2003-02-17 07:52 PM


I know whereof you speak! Make mine a butterscoth ripple!
ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2003-02-18 06:03 AM


OOOOO, a doublr dip of bing cherry...please!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

lorenlynn
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California Beaches
6 posted 2003-02-19 07:58 PM


I'm a two scooper myself chocolate and chocolate mint. Cute poem.

Wisdom comes with winters. **  Oscar Wilde.

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7 posted 2003-02-19 11:14 PM


I was a litle scared of this one.  Thanks for making it a joke.  Love, Joyce
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8 posted 2003-02-20 12:53 PM


hehehehe...loved this!
Nan
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9 posted 2003-02-26 08:17 AM


Just gotta satisfy those cravings... Very cute, SPIRIT...
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10 posted 2003-02-26 05:21 PM


Cute.
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11 posted 2003-02-26 06:40 PM


Heh heh, cute write...much enjoyed.

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And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Flower
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12 posted 2003-03-17 11:33 AM


Very clever, surprised me at the end. I'm a sherbert lover myself. Voted.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

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13 posted 2003-03-22 02:14 PM


SPIRIT, wonderful write.  I now must go to Baskin Robbins.  Thanks for sharing.  
lorenlynn
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