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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert

0 posted 2003-03-04 02:15 PM



HERO

(Written for my daughter)

I could say:

How much I admire you,
Embarrassed,
You would
Shrug it off,
Not because you don’t care,
But because
You do.

I could say:

How much I applaud you
For the way
You conduct
Your life.
That you have
A dignity
That is laudable,
It would bewilder you,
Such observations.

Maybe, I should tell you:

How I envy you
Your strength and courage
Your beauty
But would you believe me?
Especially as you
Are unwilling
To recognize
Your own assets.
Perhaps, maybe,
You would believe me

When I say:

How proud I am
Of your ability
To face the enemy,
To stand your ground,
To fight.
Unlike myself,
Who would but
Play ostrich
To avoid confrontation.
There again, maybe,

I should acknowledge:

Just how much
I sincerely
Do love you.
What a blessing
You are to me,
Pure and simple.
That God knew,
How much
I would need
Heroes in my life,
So He gave me you.

I be me BUT who does me be?

© Copyright 2003 das - All Rights Reserved
Nightshade
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2003-03-04 02:54 PM


Talk about needing a kleenex! SPIRIT, from one mother of a daughter, to another, this is simply beautiful. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2003-03-04 07:53 PM


Do say it to her.  she deserves to know she is a hero in her mother's eyes.  Joyce
SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
3 posted 2003-03-04 07:59 PM


She has it matted and framed and hanging on her bedroom wall. She's nearly 38 and I admire her tremendously.
aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind
4 posted 2003-03-04 08:29 PM


Nice and sweet too.

~Every girl has a dream within.

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Member Patricius
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5 posted 2003-03-05 12:34 PM


SPIRIT:  Any daughter would be absolutley thrilled to have this written of her. I have this kind of a relationship with my own daughter and feel very blessed because of it.  Great poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

Flower
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 240
California
6 posted 2003-03-17 11:29 AM


This is great. I hope my mom felt that about me.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

bestgirl911
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Clio, MI , United We Stand
7 posted 2003-03-17 09:41 PM


Spirit...

How lucky your daughter is.

Best

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