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SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

0 posted 2003-02-24 10:19 AM

IS IT YOURS OR MINE?

You read my words,
Smile and criticize.
You tell me
That a lot of what I say
Is pure gibberish.
That I should say it that way,
Should change this word
For another which you believe
To be better,
And so on and so forth.
You are unable,
Or maybe unwilling
To understand,
That this is my passion,
My emotion,
My feelings and desires.
What is written on these pages
Is my heart and soul,
My insight,
My autograph.
If I change it
To meet with your approval,
I will have lost me
And been nothing more
Than a ghost writer
For you.

cupcake
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 116

1 posted 2003-02-25 12:45 PM

Interesting - hadn't thought of it like that.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-02-25 01:47 AM

Well I don't know who is trying to change the words of our talented poetess. Don't let it happen. Love, Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-02-25 06:27 PM

SPIRIT: Writing poetry is such a personal thing, I don't think anyone has a right to suggest drastic change, to a poet. Trying to change the way each one of us writes, would destroy the essence of the poem. At least so it seems to me. Don't change a thing!

Betty Lou Hebert

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

4 posted 2003-02-25 07:45 PM

I've always thought the same way, Spirit.

coyote

"The greatest of all faults is to be conscious of none."
Thomas Carlyle

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-02-25 09:32 PM

SPIRIT~
You're gonna get a great big AMEN from me on this one !

Keep writing from your heart, imagination and inspiration .... that's what distinguishes a good poetess from the masses~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

6 posted 2003-03-18 01:46 PM

When you stop and think about you are right, it should be yours and yours alone to be true.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

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