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ShadowLost
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since 2001-06-23
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0 posted 2001-06-25 01:57 PM


Life is something unique
Many believe we are alone
As seemingly the center
Of all of existence
Unknown creatures gather around
Beyond our unknown recognition
They all scatter whimsically
Above the sights sweeping through
Messengers to take away with us
When death finds its time here
No one knows where or when they'll be
Beings laying softly on our conscienceness
Mystical, magical, humanly impractical
A sense or a breeze rushing briskly by
Uncontainble within perceptions of our soul
Death tolls the bells of ashes on a heart
Coming together as one with might
Lasting victory within the passage of a season
Fall breaks quickly into winter in one's presence
Gradually breathless the stream stands still
All is stolen and taken home to remain
Fallen leaves held securely by the dew
Twilight splashes blackness against the shine
Transcending space and time through limits
Billowing shadows against our inner being
Simultaneos lightening shudders as thunder crashes
Neverending speech hangs on to every echo
Eternal putter against our objections
Laying low softly standing as one

~ShadowLost~

...and now these three things remain: faith, hope and love.  But, the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13.13

© Copyright 2001 ShadowLost - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-25 04:48 PM


Imaginative and pretty.  Joyce
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2001-06-25 11:51 PM


There is so much going on in this poem, I am going to have to read it several times, I believe.  Very intriguing!  Welcome to the site and hope to see more of your work.

Betty Lou Hebert

brian madden
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ireland
3 posted 2001-06-26 02:23 PM


the mysterious of life that is what they are.. a mystery.

enjoyed the read

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
4 posted 2001-06-27 06:33 AM


S_L
You have a lot of deep thoughts, which could be broadened in many individual musings. Welcome to Pub2.

Melton

ShadowLost
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since 2001-06-23
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5 posted 2001-06-27 02:51 PM


Many thoughtful and encouraging words from you.  Feeling welcomed amongst you.  Thank you.

You're perceptive there is much going on underneath the layers waiting to find the words to express the depth of what lies inside.

~ShadowLost~

...and now these three things remain: faith, hope and love.  But, the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13.13

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