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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2002-09-22 03:37 AM


Time Machine

Our song comes on the radio
she looks over at me
a smile teasin’ at her lips.
Feelin’ all the lovin’ in the world
as she gently touches my face
with just a few fingertips.

Sure been a special ride
these years spent in love
passing lifes tricks n treats.
Rolling along homeward road
my baby right next to me
pullin’ over at our neckin’ creek.

Taking her in my arms
kissing her salty cheeks
right back to Daddy’s Ford, years ago.
Wrapping ourselves all over
twisting around with our song
seems everything just like before.

Yeah, this old pickup is a time machine
taking us back to yesterday
down at our creek, what a trip!
Our song on “oldies” radio
she’s just a lovin’ me...still, always
a smile teasin’ at her lips.

~~~~~



© Copyright 2002 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
CHILI
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1 posted 2002-09-22 06:22 AM


Tramp Poet, Love like that knows no time barrier, isn't it great?  
Moon Dust
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2 posted 2002-09-22 08:56 AM


wow I'm happy that you found love timelessly

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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3 posted 2002-09-22 10:52 AM


Now this is what love is all about.  Joyce
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4 posted 2002-09-22 07:45 PM


Sweet rememberings, Daniel!
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