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Why Should I ? (sorry about the triple post)_
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Why Should I ? (sorry about the triple post)_ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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This is a song I have been working on.....songs are an avenue I have been interested in persuing for some time.....any HONEST feed back would be appreciated....It is sort of a rockin country tune... Why should I tell you what I long to say? what difference will it make in the end? why should I try to stop you from leaving? When all you really need is to just get away.... away from the heartache confusion and mistrust.... away from me darling alone with your thoughts... you will see then that your better off without me you will see then that all you needed was space.... space to heal the heartache space to let go... I know you still love me I know it's hard to let go let go of a love that you've had for many years but in time all the tears will dry..... so why should I tell you what I long to say? why should I try to stop you from leaving? Why should I cry all through the night? What difference will it make in the long run? lying beside you I feel your heart beat... it is one of the many things about you I will miss... still I know you love me after all I have done... your heart in mine I know we were one.... You tell me to tell you all that i feel tell me..... why should I? why should I tell you of all the pain in my heart? why should I tell you oh how much I regret? Why should I tell you I don't want you to leave? will it make a differnce between you and me? (repeat first chorus) Fade out.... [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I figured with the triple post I had better read this one. We know it was intentional to get our attention and reply to this. Actually I loved it. I can hear the melody in my head and would love someday to hear in sound how it all comes out. Good luck with this new endeavor. Great start. By the way; do I need to reply on all three? [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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