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Forever and Eternity |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Always I am with you.. In mind Think of times Just you and I Under blue skies Atop a table Planes abound Only two hearts beating Is the only sound In heart Feel the passion Of a love once gained Feelings shared Caught up in the snare Of romance and bliss Ending with a tender kiss In soul Let emotions soar Spirits meet and hearts explore An excitement and energy We have brought forth Always I am with you Forever and eternity Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
In mind, in heart, in soul ... beautifully expressed Coco, and I really liked the format and flow ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Coco this is LOVELY... a beautiful and serene poem perfect presentation as well. creative and well written take care, jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Coco,...love your writing style. This is good,...damn good. Love how you expressed in each one...In your mind,...your heart,...and your soul. Lovely work. Take care. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ Oh, I like it very much. Wonderful thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Coco This is quite exquisite, an exceptional piece, very beautiful indeed. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
Your poem is lovely!! it has a sence of beauty about it. you have a beautfull talent. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful coco, I hear those two hearts beating as one. wonderful. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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Maxine New Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 6Forestville, Maryland |
You hit the spot right there!!!! All the right words. You really brought this poem to my attention! Andrea Maxine c/o 2001 |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Coco~ I really like this piece! Beautifully done!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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