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Valentine. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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The song begins to play soft and gentle Across the room the melody begins to form But if I could not sing words so warm How would I show my love to you? How would you know the love that I feel? How could I to you my true heart reveal? The poem begins to flow calm and tender Across the page, the words begin to form But if I could not write of the storm How would I share my love with you? How would you know the love in my heart? How to begin my love, how would I start? Your love gives me a song to sing Your heart gives me words to rhyme You are my inspiration Valentine. . . Song and poem begin to meet in her heart Now together, they take my love to her And send her my thoughts of love so pure Will she know of my love so true? Will my love for her show in my eyes? When I'm with her my heart soars to the skies If there were no songs for me to sing If there were no words for me to rhyme I'd still give you my love, my Valentine. . . You are my love, my light, my soul. . . My Valentine. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Everything you write, Sveetie, done with purity of heart...'tis lovely, m'friend. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Sven, You have a heart filled with love and romance and when you write, you do pour your heart out.... Excellent... My salute to you Sir Sven, and regards sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Pure and full of love right from the heart. Excellent Sven! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, thank you. . . you know. . . Sudhir, yes my friend. . . from my heart. . . always. . . thank you. . . ethome. . .thank you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Absolutely perfect. When you turn your pen over to your heart it really comes through for you. I am left in awe of your talent and your ability to draw one into your poems. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awww...so very lovely. This is beautiful! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
i agree with Mark here Sven, you wear your heart on your sleeve, my friend. Heartfelt words as always. No deaf ears here. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
you just about have me swooning! ive read several of your poems and im always lacking the right words to say...because i truly admire your talent and emotion...another wonderful piece! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven this is a most beautiful piece for a lovely valentine...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sigh ... simply beautiful Sven!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
This women sounds like she is truly special. I hope she feels the same about you? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Mark. . . wow!. . . thank you for that. . . I don't know if I'm all that talented, but I thank you for the compliment. . . Saunni, thank you!! Marina. . . thank you my friend and I'm glad that someone's listening. . . poutprincess. . . don't fall over!! I'm glad that you enjoyed this one. . . tracie. . . thank you my friend. . . Kit. . . thank you!! Martinque. . . thanks for your reply. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Par excellence ! 'Your love gives me a song to sing' My friend, you sing it well ! I thoroughly enjoy reading your heart. My appreciation for the 'songs' you sing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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