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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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destructive by nature everything i touch crumbling cracking falling like dust shattered dreams forget me nots that i've forgotten left alone bursting at the seams lifting my head to the heavens screaming "why me?' as I look to my breathren who holds the key lifes most precious treasures being stolen from me my heart in my hand i give to you for if I keep it god knows what I'll do now go and tell them I wish them no pain this life isn't for living when there is nothing to gain my sorrow will only pass on to my kin i leave this world now and with me goes my sin........ |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Sweet Lady, this aches -- I hope it is not truth..? There is always light in the darkness, my dear ... may you find swiftly the beacon to lead your soul out of this night. Hugs. --Kess YOUR LIFE IS A TEST It is only a test ... If this were your Actual Life, you would have been given better instructions! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JulieAnn, I think I have found one of your first posts...very sad, but I'm glad to know you've since done happier ones... you have an ability to reach out and touch someone...that's a great gift... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow girl.. this is so well written... your words ache and rise up off the page... very well expressed and defined ... i relate to this, but then you knew that already  glad I didnt miss this one ... take care, jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
JulieAnn.... its from within your words, I see the past that I once live, and maybe in secret I still live it. This a very powerful, and moving poem. Thnk-you. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all so much fro your replies...I was a little depressed when I wrote this but am much better now.....until next week....you know it depends on the weather!! Julie :) |
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