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The Chambers of My Heart (For Dusk Treader)
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The Chambers of My Heart (For Dusk Treader) |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Within the chambers of my heart < !signature-->Amber firelight sweeps And lost amongst the golden flames We softly drift asleep... Sunlit beaches line our dreams Waves shining 'pon the shore Strolling on the almond sands The future we explore... Soon we drift to meadows green And stand on river's bluff Watching azure waters whisper To clouds of silver fluff... Ruby bursts bring 'round the eve As faithful sun retires Heaven blinks and stars emerge As wild grows our fire... Within the chambers of my heart Your light has warmed me so Forever is our dream to take And always love shall grow. My own version of our dream, love.  *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
The changing scenery is wonderfuly described. A great poem. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful Krista, it's perfect.  |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
*blush* Oh, sweetheart... this is beautiful! I love these dreams, and it warms my heart to be sharing the time I am now with you... I hope these dreams become reality Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I love it, it's like you talk exactly how I dream. "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
what fabulous imagery within this lovely pieceTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much! *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Beautiful poem Krissa. You really must tell me when you post these things. And I'm glad you used space in this one... that should be a rule for you. Always use space, even if it is for NINJA... okie?? good! ahahha... Great job "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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