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KiLeZ
New Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-06-18 06:49 PM

*FORGET*

Forget the times he walked by,
forget the times he made you cry.
Forget the times he spoke your name,
remember now you're not the same.
Forget the times he held your hand,
forget the sweet things if you can.
Forget the times and dont pretend,
remember now hes just your friend.
If theres nothing missing in my life,
then why do these tears come at night.

Snickers
Member

since 2000-05-25

Posts 88
East Haddam, CT

1 posted 2000-06-18 09:07 PM

This was very good. But no matter how hard you try to forget things, sometimes you just can't. Maybe you should try to incorporate this idea into your poem somehow. Also, the last lines "if there's nothing missing in my life, then why does these tears come at night" That's from Britney Spears song "Lucky". I do believe that's plagerism, my friend. You'd better be careful with that. Plagerism can get you into a lot of trouble, and why would you want to use somebody elses words anyway?

~<3 Alwayz~
**Nikki**

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-06-19 05:07 PM

i give you mad props for this poem. it is BEAUTIFUL. so many girls can read it only to find themselves. at least i can relate to you on this on. its hard to let go of the past. most of all having to see this person only to be friends. life is hard it comes with many consequences. ohh well we just got to deal with them. and with that plagerism i dont think that is what it is. ya know. the line fits perfectly with the poem. who cares what kind of judgement these people have. its your poem so dont let these things get to you.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-20 01:44 PM

how i do love this poem i just had to print it. and its very true its so hard to be friends after a relatsion ship.hang in there

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

4 posted 2000-06-20 06:18 PM

Hi I know it so very well...I guess if its going to be good for both of you why not be friends to the end..

Sincerely
A_L

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-17 02:03 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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