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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
You speak no words So how do you explain And expect me to change With no words spoken I stay the same < !signature--> I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul [This message has been edited by Jeremiah Johnson (edited 06-18-2000).] |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jeremiah~Definately interesting!  But, very truthful. If no one says anything how can they just "expect" you to do something about yourself or your behavior. Please, don't ever change for anyone else, change for yourself and in doing so you will benefit others.  Keep writing! Love your work. Glad you decided to post! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~  "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" "Shoot for the moon, if you shall fall short, you always have the stars to fall upon" |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Those are true words. I hope to see more from you. PS where are you from? |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I really like this one. The words do hold a lot of truth. ~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
thank you all for your replies. and nikkisweet i'm from Florida. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
You say a lot with very little words. Liked this much ! |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
I really dint get it in complete sense as it was very short... Sincerely A_l |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear jeremiah, *stands back and strokes his chin, contemplating* this is quite a work you've got here... simple, yet devestatingly complex in meaning... i give it two thumbs and a fountain pen UP... gets my vote for the book  sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i agree with the rest,Jeremiah short,simple but yet so deep |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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