Among The Clouds of Heaven (repost)

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Among The Clouds of Heaven (repost)

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-07-31 11:11 PM

Hushed pallor decends the sky
Dusting tenderly
Upon the scarlet sage
Which enwreathes saturated earth
Where tearstains bathed in crystal light
Fall in intricate patterns.

Weaving apparitions of love
Braid among threads of moonlight
Humming a bittersweet swan's song
Memories lay enshrined in gold
Among the clouds of Heaven.

Whispers glint in tragic eyes
And leap from soul to soul
But only the belief in tomorrow--
In hope, in life, in love forevermore
Will guide us past the pain.

Lift thine eyes and gently fly
Past the pale shroud of blue
And into the quietly waiting dreams
Of blossoming eternity.

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-08-01 08:47 AM

This was simply beautiful Krista ... almost mystical with such a peaceful flow ... lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

2 posted 2000-08-01 10:50 AM

Wow...truly beautiful and such wonderful imagery. I loved this piece!

Salooma

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-08-01 11:38 AM

Ok, I think I just fainted. This is sooo beautiful. Enchanting. I love it!!!

*~Meredith~*

If I were the sun,
You would be in shadow
And if I had a gun,
There'd be no tomorrow
*BNL

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