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Neurotica (nothing dirty...promise!) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Every morning I wake up... My brain is idle, Then it begins to wander. Thoughts flow freely. I believe I did things I know that I haven't. I question the obvious. I repeat myself..try to make me understand. I didn't...or I did. Love myself? Why... did I do something worthy? I can't shake thoughts I should never have had. I know that's impossible...is that what I did? I plainly know it's right.. but was it wrong? My head can't rest, my body shakes. I feel useless, worthless... I make no sense. Double-check what's sure to be...was it really? I yearn to take my life back... Organize these random thoughts. I know I didn't... how come I think I did? Rummage through me, I know I can find an out. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jenn, great poem. Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed it. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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littleC Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 21 |
Wonderfully writen! littleC |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I really likes this piece. It's the poem's rammbles that make it really make a lot of sense. I've written stuff like this and it just makes sense...what you are trying to say! Great piece....wonderful work! Salooma |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Are you confused? i think i know a shrink you can go to or do i? i don't know. just playing with you girl. this is a very good poem and i hope to read more of you soon and gald you like it here. oh, yes i'm leaving for South Carolina tomorrow. so i'll email you today about that girl and what going on, on my side. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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