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Gregory
Junior Member

since 2000-07-25

Posts 22
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States

0 posted 2000-07-27 02:27 AM

"River Of Love"

Since the first time I saw you wearing your beautiful smile,
I knew nothing could stop me, not a hundred miles

From being with you the one that I love,
For you, you're and angel...a blessing from above

With the love in our hearts and the sparkle in your eye,
The love that we shared, I will never let die

I will love and cherish you until the day I past,
But since my soul breaths the air of life, or love...it shall last

Baby I told you once and I'll say it again,
Life without you, is a nightmare that doesn't end

Your my heart, my soul, my beautiful dove,
For eternity our love will flow, like the "River Of Love"

Gregory

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-07-27 02:42 AM

awwwww...this is such a sweet poem...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

2 posted 2000-07-27 02:58 AM

great poem it definately feels good to have someone so special in your life good luck with everything

Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

3 posted 2000-07-29 09:22 PM

This is a very great poem and very romantic, the rhyme works very well. It's very sweet, and I hope you never lose your love passion you have.
Kittie

Enchanted Star
Junior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 14
New Port Richey, FL

4 posted 2000-07-30 01:08 AM

I liked this poem...because...its so true when someone is love...I believe that when your in love the world is at their finger tips!!

CindyLuC

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

5 posted 2000-07-30 09:51 PM

great job I think you did a nice job expressing your feelings. Hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

6 posted 2000-07-31 09:24 AM

Beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. I loved it.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

7 posted 2000-07-31 09:56 AM

This is so sweet! What a lucky girl and what a great poet to write such wonderful work!

Salooma

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

8 posted 2000-07-31 11:36 PM

Very sweet and beautiful! I enjoyed!

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2000-08-01 08:52 AM

This is lovely Gregory ... penned so tenderly, just beautiful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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