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Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22
Posts 329
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-11-27 05:23 PM


How can I find the words to show how you have changed me.

Your are my friend,
Quiet,
Timid,
Shy,
Friends till the end.

You helped me,
You opened my eyes,
Wild,
Magical,
Free,
Friends togther we will forever be.

You had to leave
Staying wasn't a choice
Hugs
Tears
Goodbyes
Friends forever
You will see
Across the miles which come between,
My friend,
My sister,
You will forever be.


© Copyright 2000 Malinda C. Duggan - All Rights Reserved
Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
1 posted 2000-11-27 05:26 PM


this was beautiful
i can totaly relate my sister is my best friend and she had to leave this year for university
shes far away and i hardly get to see her all year
i miss her tons
this was awsoem
keep writing< !signature-->

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you.  Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle


[This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 11-27-2000).]

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-11-28 12:25 PM


Welcome to passions!!!

Good poem!!!Well even through the miles you and your friend could still be friends...I hope that yous are able to get through this...Its hard to let go of someone close to you...But it will get better...One day you and your friend will be together again...


People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-11-29 01:28 PM


Excellent job of telling this, I really like this poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-11-30 07:11 PM


A wonderful tribute to your sister!
A great read!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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