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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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(Title) An epitaph on a man who lost his life, his only love, his lovely wife. He'd give up his soul, or the part that's left, if he could only reunite with what God has kept. Memories of her torture him so, this void of emptiness has brought him too low. He's gone beyond the boundary of logic and reason, all four are done and now it's a new season: Why am I here and she is not? Is this part of Gods holy plot? Is this a calling to realize or to see, Where I cannot go, where I cannot be? Is this some way to prove me strong, To see where I come from, to see where I belong? Is this the way of the devine being, To steal what's mine just for seeing? To see me crumble, to see me tear, Dieing with my soul in complete dispair? Do you actually think that that was wise, To destroy a man while in his demise? Your the one that put me in this state of decay. Take me out and turn night to day. I love you God, now love me in return. Give me what I want, or let me burn!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
What a poem Dopey!!! I really like this one...Such intresting thoughts...But why did you call it bla bla??? ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i didnt call it bla bla....... that was justo n the chat forum to get people to read it. The title is actually that WHOLE STANZA together. In parenthesis it says (TITLE). Thats where it beings and it ends at the colon ---> : so yea, its a LONG title, i cant type that out in the SUBJECT place of the forum. Ok so yea! thanks about the compliment! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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