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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-09-13 08:27 AM

You don't get it,
do you?
You don't understand,
but how could you?
You can't see,
what you mean to me.
You are all,
that I want to be.
If I cry,
you would say it's okay.
And promise me,
you'd never go away.
You said we'd,
always be together.
I thought I knew,
the meaning of the word forever.
Forever is not,
just one kiss.
Forever does not,
end like this.
When you say something,
I want you to be true.
Because in my heart,
I believe you.
And know I am alone,
and I wonder why.
When you lied to me,
then who am I?

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So im back to the traditional love poems again. Im confused, and that's never a good thing. weeeellll, bye bye. ALlysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-13 10:37 AM

Allysa~~~This was good work...But is this one about Justin???

Cause you put:
And know I am alone,
and I wonder why.
When you lied to me,
then who am I?

Well keep up the good work!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-13 02:02 PM

Oh, this has me thinking! I liked the poem, great job on it

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2000-09-13 03:20 PM

Thanks much for replying to my poem. I think this might be about Justin, I don't know, I came up with it really quick and submitted it really quick, well bye.
Allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-09-13 06:14 PM

I liked the poem. Gooooood sppon...the spoon poem? Havent thought about it yet, still in the thought process. Too preocupied with college planz.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2000-09-13 06:59 PM

Hey good poem! I have a question.... spoon poem? Could you guys clarify, please? I've heard you use the reference more than once. I know a few "spoon-type" definitions... but I was just wondering what you guys were talkin' about.
Jenn< !signature-->

"You can not plan the future by the past." - Edmund Burke

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-13-2000).]

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

6 posted 2000-09-14 08:20 AM

Dopey: Keep workin' on the spoon thing. Love ya!!

Jenn: Okay, Dopey replied to one of my poems and asked if I could write about a fork. ANd I did. (It's called Twist (a poem about a fork for Dopey, if you haven't read it) and so since I did that, he has to write about a spoon.
Allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

7 posted 2000-09-14 09:40 AM

oohw, I could have written this one!!!! its beautiful allysa!!!!!

luvz, VS!

I dream about how it's gonna end
Approaching me quickly
Living a life of fear
I only want my mind to be clear...
~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~

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