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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-09-08 08:15 PM


FOREVER ?

Is love just an illusion?
I hate all this confusion!
Is it meant to be or not?
Must cherish what we've got.
Yes, we are together,
but will it last forever?
Do you hear me think about you?
Everything I feel is true,
& I hope you feel it too.
I'm wishing that I was,
all you've ever dreamed of.
When you walked in,
you showed me I could love again.
You rescued me,
& made me see,
that life is worth living,
& the love to you is worth giving.
So will it last forever?
Or will it painfully end?
I want this for a lifetime,
& if you do too we can!

~If you love somebody don't write their name inside a heart, hearts can be broken. Write it in a circle, circles are neverending~  

LOVE ELMO
<3

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StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-09-08 09:00 PM


Very cute Elmo!!   I much enjoyed this one!!
YOu are very talented, I am happy ot have read your work.
Please do keep it up.
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

p.s. I hope it all works out for ya!
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   If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.  



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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-09-08 09:26 PM


Thanx Jess   this is an old poem. me & my boyfriend have had some tough times but we r doing pretty good now it's hard when we live 5 hours away from each other & I'm busy with college & he's busy with his own business   LOVE ELMO <3
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-08 09:26 PM


You rescued me,
& made me see,
that life is worth living,
& the love to you is worth giving.

This is the way that I feel about my boyfriend...He was there for me when nobody else was...Keep up the good work...And I wish you the best with your boyfriend!!!


~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~


qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2000-09-08 09:29 PM


Yea i know how u feel erin. I told my boyfriend about things that happened when i was a little girl, things i never told anyone before, & he stuck by me & showed me how to get past it, & live life again he never ran from me.I thank him soo much for that   LOVE ELMO <3

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-09-08 09:32 PM


For some reason before me and my boyfriend hooked up I felt as if I could trust him so much...I told him things too that none of my friends know...I just felt like its finally time to get the things out and learn to trust someone...And now here we are together for 7 months now...

~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~


qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
6 posted 2000-09-10 09:31 AM


Yea Erin that's so true awe 7 months   how cute. Me & my boyfriend have been together for a year & 3 months now   But maybe its easier for us cause he lives 5 hours away lol j/k   thanx erin LOVE ELMO <3
Misty Blue
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 44

7 posted 2000-09-10 11:58 AM


Hey, This is kind of depressing, but I've never been in love so this poem is just a wish to me. May be one day it will happen and I'll have this poem to compare it to. Stay Tru!
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