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Wisdom
New Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-08-27 01:53 AM

I told you how I felt,
I have no reason to lie,
you ask why I feel this way,
And then you start to cry.

The pain you feel hurts me just the same,
The fun we had playing the game,
Don't worry or question I'll take the blame,
I know I deserve it but it hurts to even speak your name.

The hate you have for me will come to pass,
But the pain in my heart will undoubtubly last,
I still can't believe, it happened so fast,
And although it hurts to think of you,
Your still apart of my past.

Heartache this deep takes time to heal,
So while we're recovering I'll make you a deal,
Let's keep in touch and go our own ways,
And when we meet again never think of that day.

My deed is done please live in peace always,
that is this and this is all what is there left to say.

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Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

1 posted 2000-08-27 03:34 AM

Excellence! Pure and simple… You have captured something remarkable here. Wisdom...interesting name. Here’s a cool quote using your name.. “Turn to me and seek wisdom, or turn from me and seek wisdom in thyself”.

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Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-27 12:08 PM

I think you did a great job with this poem, it's very well written

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-27-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-08-27 03:03 PM

welcome to passions!!!this is a really good poem...i cant wait to see more...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

4 posted 2000-08-27 06:29 PM

Welcome to passions. Such a heartfelt piece you have here! I truly do hope things work out for the best~Keep your head up and remember that if things were meant to be then they shall be! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2000-08-27 08:33 PM

This is a good piece. True, the past is over, and there is nothing left to say. But you will always have to gaze upon the scars that the past tends to leave behind.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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