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LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-08-25 06:05 PM

Who's gonna carry me
When I fall asleep?
Who will pull me out
When I'm in too deep?

Where are the snowflakes
Now that winter is done?
I'm sorry, dear
I thought you were the one

So I cry out
As I dry out
And I listen closely
To the voice of a ghostly
Shadow
While he tells me not to worry
I'm worried, dear
So save me

Who's gonna touch me
When I'm too far to reach?
Who's gonna help me
When I'm too hard to teach?

Where are the angels
Now that heaven is done?
I'm sorry, dear
I didn't know you would run

So I cry out
As I dry out
And I listen closely
To the voice of a ghostly
Shadow
While he tells me not to worry
I'm worried, dear
So save me

So I cry out
As I die out
And you listen closely
To the voice of a ghostly
Angel
While she tells you there's no hurry
Don't worry, dear
He saved me

*Hey guys, just another of my songs. I wrote in w/ my ex in mind, so remember that*

Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-08-27 06:38 PM

Such strong emotions here! Nicely done! Keep it up. I know how you feel all too well!! Best of luck in life and love! Love always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-08-27 08:20 PM

lyric~~~i swear you are one of the most talented people...you write poems and music...what else do you do???write books???LOL keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2000-08-27 08:23 PM

I know its repetitive but your an awesome writer, you write some of the best lyrics to songs as well as poems. Put this on some music and you have a masterpiece. great job!

~Jeremy~

"I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering,
I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection."
~DMX~ "Prayer III"

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-08-27 08:30 PM

I think all I can say is "diddo" to them up there, great job on this one!

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