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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Poets are people with Alot of Emotion Searching the world Like A vast ocean Casting spells with There Poems as Potions Writing from A Heart filled With Motion. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear jeremiah, this is quite lovely  short, but beautifully written...sincerely, a sad tomato |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Jeremiah, Good poem, it makes me feel good to know that others think about passions even when they're not here. Good work! Crystal Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey. That was good-I like it! Keep it up. Bel |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
thank you very much for posting this up. short and to the point and lovely magickal allusions. a great dedication. our job is not an easy one. we move the world one heart at a time. we save the world one soul at a time. We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
brought a smile to my face like the rhymes in this poem!  |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
this was a very good poem...you gave a lot of credit to us poem writers. I really enjoyed it. My e-mail is nicolec@family.net , if you ever want to talk and I would love to share some of my poetry with you. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Thank you all for your replies this one was for you. and nikkisweet i will email you . I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
wow, great poem Jerimiah. I enjoyed reading it. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jeremiah~~~i cant believe that i didnt reply to this one long ago...it is so good!!!where have you been lately??? ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree, this is very well done |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
That was a really good poem. I like it. It's true. What more is there to say? |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey babe! I'm with ERIN on where have u been? I haven't talked to you for awhile. But this was indeed really beautiful. Short..but awesome. Just being picky..but it should have been their not there sorry! im just picky hehe i still luv ya tho! ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very nice post...and very true i like the form you gave this and def wanna see more of your work around....don't be a stranger! Salooma |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Cool Jeremiah. Good work. See ya later. Jenn |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Exquisite! You've done a great job on this. I love it, and I love you. Peace out! *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Cool poem Jerry  Ha Ha..Really it is a good poem. stay cool  ~~Lavada~~  "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Hey man, I've been gone for awhile. Glad I caught this one, its great! And oh so true. jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem Keep up the good work! Lauren |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice poem. It really seems to capture the essance of a poet, with out limiting it. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desi |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
This is such a great poem..I liked the tone of it.. "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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