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Euclid the Kid
Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon

0 posted 2000-08-14 01:28 PM


If
I can
dream,
I am alive

If
I can
speak
I have a voice

If
I can
listen
I have rapport

If
I can
love
I have connection

If
I can
become
I have meaning

If
I can
hope
I have a future



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Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-14 01:34 PM


beautiful!!! very nice and quite inspirational i must say....keep these coming!  

salooma

LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697

2 posted 2000-08-14 03:33 PM


If
I can
hope
I have a future

So true, my friend. So true... I'm glad that you realize it. Keep up the great work!


"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-08-14 05:02 PM


What a great poem Kid!
You are so talented!!
I love your work and
can't wait to read lots
more!!   Keep it up!!
Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~


~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

JnR4eva
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
4 posted 2000-08-14 05:08 PM


wow...nicely written...I think the simplicity of it all makes it such a wonderful poem  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me

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