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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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They say you must forgive the one Who tramples you like dirt I wonder who decided Who gets paid and who gets hurt I can't believe this world is so Decieved by its own eyes Just look into the souls of men And see where danger lies Where were we going When we fell into this hole? Who's gonna lead us When we haven't got a goal? Tomorrow seems so far away Today is just a crime While we're running out of heaven And running out of time And as night descends We cry Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey* This was really good. I'm actually kind of speechless. So i'll just leave it at that. Keep writing ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Wow...this is a wonderful poem, and I feel exactly like you... ...to hurt, or be hurt...that is the question! Keep it up. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wonderful poem, it flowed great and I loved it  |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This was a wonderful poem! Well written with an excellent theme. Bravo!  The one thing we must do in this world is try not to hurt. We have to try our best or we just become one of them. I can bare the pain as long as I know that I have not done the same to another. I also know that someting extrodinary is waiting for me because of the heart I own and because of the pain I have endured in the past. Some things come with a high cost and if we are not willing to pay the price; we will never reep the rewards. I hope you understand what I am trying to teel you. When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
lyricfetish...<~~ did i spell that right.. i hope so!!! amyhow.... i really like d this poem!! you r a great writter!! i hope you'll stay in this and keep writting!!love janette |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
A wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow that was a great poem! I can't think of much to tell you...other than everything happens for a reason, and everything will work out okay in the end. Keep writing and keep smiling Bel |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very nice lyric as usual...your words are so true and so heartfelt. i loved this!!! bravo! salooma |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wow... this is a powerful piece. I know that the world can be a cruel place to live, but it's up to us to make it better. It's the small things that make this world beautiful, dispite of all the sadness that seems to reign. Keep that in mind. (and smile!! )"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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