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So Far Away (responses please)
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So Far Away (responses please) |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
SO FAR AWAY: I see your face before me A small faraway picture Yet you haunt me every second of every day You're in my heart, in my mind In my thoughts that keep me blind You're in the smell of a passerby The essential, permeating cry You're in the bird who made his home In the room you called your own You're in a dog, a fluffy toy That once you brought to bring me joy You're in a song, one we shared That played when first my love I declared You're in the rain that now falls so much The walks with which we shared its touch You're in the memories of times together The place I want to stay forever You're in a certain special place Where only OUR shadows graced You're in my bed as I remember too The way you'd draw me close to you You're in the pain only you and I know That brought us close to love and grow You're in the touch I still remember And the pain of a missed fourteenth of December You're in my heart, and there to stay But... my heart, my love You're so far away. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sylvia...I recently had a lady friend tell me that I was in everything she saw. Your poem brought it all home. Hope your special someone gets home soon. Loved the poem....Hardrock |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This poem is excellent! You have my vote. |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Sylvia... I loved this poem! It made my mind wonder back to memories... great work!  Cyndey "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sylvia, this is beautiful and expressive and very touching. I love it, and it reminds me of someone I love who is far away too Great poem in every way. Catalinamoon |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
isn't it funny sometimes how a person can envelope us with his memory but at the same time we frown at his or her absence?.. nice work, sgreybe. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is a hard truth on what love can be for the first time. Touching beyond words.  --the little one |
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