Starving (vampire thoughts)

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Dark Poetry #2

Starving (vampire thoughts)

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

0 posted 2000-07-14 11:11 AM

I can feel my soul
bleeding
as my mind pretends to be full
decieving
I need to drink your liquid existance
quenching
my eternal desire for your essence
endlessly
To warm my sanguinary longings with your phlebotomy
thirsting...

Starving

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-14 05:16 PM

~Oooh,...a most creepy piece. Very dramatic and well written. "Your liquid existance"....mmm,...good one. Entertaining. *Peace.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-07-14 10:59 PM

Great descriptive piece. Feeling the need to consume? Shades of Lestat..
Loved it.
Catalinamoon

"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

3 posted 2000-07-15 05:45 AM

I like this one a lot. You do very well in expressing an insatiable need to feed. Be it literally or symbolically.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

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