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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-07-06 05:35 PM


Coming up roses,
Shining coat of gloss,
Tinged with beauty,
Love is aroused.

Pull back quickly,
There is another,
Probably more worthy,
Most likely better.

Serenade the first,
Coo at the second.
One is more likely to be chosen,
One is already chosen.

Paint a pretty picture,
Make her believe,
Touch her body,
Tease her constantly.

Please be honest,
Confusion kills,
Tell it truthfully,
Do not hint at the obvious.

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
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1 posted 2000-07-06 10:49 PM


well you are doing good. love your work my friend and i'm glad that your on here now and i hope you stay awhile and if you don't remember i know were you live. hehehe LOL you know i'm JJ. well i enjoyed this much so do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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