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allan
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0 posted 2000-07-06 12:31 PM




All you need is love
Love is love is love is love
All you need is love


We check the minutes
Love is on the agenda
No further business.


We cast our anchor
This love has us all at sea
Deep waters. We drift.


You are my true love
Eternal diamond, you
live here in my heart.





[This message has been edited by allan (edited 07-06-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Allan Tierney - All Rights Reserved
lotharingia
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1 posted 2000-07-06 01:33 PM


Wow! What has got into you!?
These poems are really incredibly sweet. A breath of fresh air!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


lotharingia
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2 posted 2000-07-06 01:46 PM


Oh, I forgot, stylistically perfect as well (as usual, and as you know, I'm sure).  
I like the throbbing heart and the red, too.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


allan
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3 posted 2000-07-06 02:12 PM


Thanks Uta!

Just bored at work, tired of my being SO serious and emerging from an awful bout of depression.

All that or else I've caught some virus!

Ällän

lotharingia
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4 posted 2000-07-07 04:38 AM


Allan, I am glad you are not depressed anymore!   BTW, you are not SO serious! No more serious than anyone else.  
Why the Ä ä?

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


allan
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5 posted 2000-07-07 11:54 AM


I did it once änd liked it! 8Story of my life? Or epitaph?)

Älän
Ü

allan
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6 posted 2000-07-07 11:55 AM


I did it once änd I liked it! (Story of my life! Or epitaph maybe??)

Älän
Ü

catalinamoon
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7 posted 2000-07-07 01:32 PM


Loved these Allan



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Honeybee
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8 posted 2000-07-07 04:59 PM



Well written haikus Allan!  I especially loved the last one  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

kaile
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9 posted 2000-07-08 02:42 AM


delightful sense of humour here...thanx for the read
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